First draft is chugging along

I haven’t updated in a while, but I have been writing. I’ve been trying not to change the outline too much now that the story is in motion, but I’m still learning so much about storytelling that I’m constantly seeing better ways to do earlier scenes. Oh well, I’ll get there eventually.

It’s a little hard to gauge how far I am into the story, with going back and rewriting and such, but I’m going to set the progress bar to 15% now. Once I get a little farther along I’ll try not to spend so much time going back and rewriting, though it’ll probably happen anyway. :)

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Short Stories I Love: … For a Single Yesterday by George R. R. Martin

… for a single yesterday by George R. R. Martin
Click here to read the full short story online for free.

What It’s About

… for a single yesterday is a science fiction short story about people struggling for direction and survival in the wake of an overwhelming disaster. I don’t want to get into the plot or characters any more than that, because it might give too much away. I will note that the science fiction elements are light, so even if you don’t normally like science fiction you’ll probably like this one.

Why I Like It

This is a hauntingly poignant story about the struggle between nostalgia for the past and hope for the future. I’m definitely more of a pragmatist than a romantic, but I still found myself rooting for the hopeless romantic, just a little bit.

What I Don’t Like

Nothing, really. I can’t think of any way to make it more powerful.

The Bottom Line

This is a deeply moving short story — one of the best I have ever read.

What Do You Think?

Have you read …for a single yesterday? If not, you can read it here for free. Leave a comment below and let us know what you thought of it!

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First Draft Started

My prewriting period is officially over now, and I’ve started writing the first draft. I don’t feel totally prepared yet, but I doubt I ever will, and if I don’t start writing sometime it will never get written. Here goes nothing!

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Books I Love: The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson

The Way of Kings by Brandon Sanderson
Book 1 of The Stormlight Archive

What It’s About

The Way of Kings is a bit difficult to describe in a nutshell. I’ve even seen a couple of interviews with Sanderson where he has difficulty giving a quick and meaningful description of what it’s about, but I’ll give it a shot and you can just trust that the book feels larger and more epic than what I’m about to write.

The Way of Kings the first book in a (projected) 10-volume epic fantasy series by Brandon Sanderson. It’s set in a world with frequent devastating storms that shape every aspect of life. Exposed dirt is stripped away from the ground long before any plants can take root in it, and many plants and animals have developed hard shells to help them weather the storms. These storms also infuse any gemstones that are left outside with a magical light, which is the foundation of the magic in the world. All of this serves as the backdrop for the opening struggles of what promises to be a huge ongoing conflict, full of intrigue and clashing armies and crazy magical battles.

Why I Like It

One of the most interesting aspects of the setting is how the people of the world use the magical light. There are legends of powerful mystics in the distant past who could perform amazing feats using the light, but the people of the story’s present day treat it more like an emerging science. The world has a Renaissance feel to it, with inventors coming up with new ways to harness the light’s energy for practical purposes, like heating and long distance communication. These people are not just trying to recover the glories of the past. They are working to create an even better future.

The nations of the world are varied and detailed. The main story threads take place in two of the many kingdoms in the world, but there are glimpses of many others. The world has a lot of depth to it, making you feel like you are reading about an alternate reality full of people with complicated interlocking histories that create dangerous undercurrents beneath the main story arc.

The first novel in any series has a difficult role to fill. It must deliver a satisfying story that feels complete by itself, while also revealing enough hints of a larger conflict to entice the reader to read the rest of the series. The Way of Kings pulls this off. The main story kept me turning the pages, and when I reached the end I definitely wanted to jump right into the next book.

What I Don’t Like

There is a line of flashback chapters woven into the main story, telling some of the backstory of the main character. While these flashbacks are well written and interesting, I usually find myself more interested in the main story than the flashback so I always want to skim through the flashback to get to the next chapter and see what happens next.

The Bottom Line

The Way of Kings is a great epic fantasy story and a very promising start for Sanderson’s new series. The setting feels fresh, with a unique magic system and a well thought out world full of rival nations with a rich and messy history. The plot is epic in scope and satisfying, but it definitely left me wanting more.

What Do You Think?

Have you read The Way of Kings? Leave a comment below and let us know what you thought of it!

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Getting Closer

My prewriting for my first book is coming along well. I’m happy with the way the plot, setting, and characters are coming together, though I’m sure they’re actually full of problems that will come up when I start writing out what I’ve outlined. Only one way to find out, I guess.

I have a definite tendency to want to plan out every detail in advance, but I’m realizing that is never going to happen. A full book just contains too many details for me to work out before I start, so I’m giving myself two more weeks and just starting writing. Even if I don’t feel totally ready to start yet (and I won’t), I’ll start writing every day and working toward a finished first draft.

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Books I Love: Dragonseed by James Maxey

Warning: This review contains major spoilers for Bitterwood and Dragonforge (Books 1 and 2 of the Bitterwood Trilogy). Stop reading now if you don’t want to know what happened in those books.

Dragonseed by James Maxey
Book 3 of the Bitterwood Trilogy

What It’s About

The old social order of the dragon kingdom is fracturing, and everyone has a different idea of how it should be put back together again. After the assassination of the old dragon king, the now leaderless kingdom is falling apart as the local lords break away into independent fiefdoms. In the city of Dragon Forge, the leaders of the successful human rebellion are having increasingly heated arguments about the future of their cause. In the Free City near the dragons’ palace, a mysterious healer has arisen and is gathering humans and dragons to himself for purposes unknown.

Why I Like It

Dragonseed has interesting characters and a delightfully twisting plot, just like the first two books in the series. The returning characters and the new characters fit in well together, and there are a couple of nice character arcs as characters grow into the roles that are required of them.

This book also gets deeper and more philosophical than the first two did. It’s never preachy or heavy-handed, but it raises some interesting questions about leadership and what it would be like for society to have basically unlimited resources at its fingertips. The science fiction elements from earlier in the series get a deeper and more robust treatment in this one.

What I Don’t Like

Much like Dragonforge, the pacing of the last half of the book feels a little off. The biggest threats are dealt with first, and the final showdown feels a bit anticlimactic. Also like Dragonforge, there are some places where the viewpoint is inconsistent and distracting.

The Bottom Line

Dragonseed is a good and satisfying end to the Bitterwood trilogy. If you’ve read (and liked) the first two, you’ll like this one too.

What Do You Think?

Have you read Dragonseed? Leave a comment below and let us know what you thought of it!

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Books I Love: Dragonforge by James Maxey

Warning: This review contains major spoilers for Bitterwood (Book 1 of the Bitterwood Trilogy).
Stop reading now if you don’t want to know what happened in Bitterwood.

Dragonforge by James Maxey
Book 2 of the Bitterwood Trilogy

What It’s About

The old dragon king is dead, and his dream of human genocide is dead with him. The new king dreams of a better world where all the sentient races can live together in a just society, but this dream is not without opponents. A prominent human prophet sees the old king’s death as the perfect time to start an uprising to reclaim human independence, and events get even more out of hand when a group of devotees frees the old king’s brother, known as the Murder God, from prison.

Why I Like It

Much like Bitterwood, the best part of Dragonforge is the ever-shifting conflict. Many of the characters from the first book return in this one, along with several new ones, and all of them still have interesting and overlapping goals. It’s a thrilling ride when the plot starts rolling downhill to the climax because there are so many important players and it feels like almost anything can happen.

The world gets much more fleshed out in Dragonforge than it did in Bitterwood. In the first book it always seemed a little odd to me that the humans could fall so far, from their current dominance of the Earth to being basically serfs in a medieval feudal society. That fall makes a lot more sense in this book, which works in some of the backstory of what happened and makes it more plausible.

There are also some great character arcs in Dragonforge. I don’t want to give anything away, but there is one character in particular that I enjoyed. This character was fairly static in the first book, but goes through a dramatic transformation in this book. The transformation makes sense as it’s happening, but I definitely didn’t see it coming.

What I Don’t Like

The pacing of the last half of the book is a little strange. The plot thread that seems to me like the most important one, the one with the highest stakes, gets resolved before the climax even really gets going. There are also several times when the viewpoint is inconsistent, where characters’ internal thoughts are interrupted by a voice that just sounds like an all-knowing narrator trying to fill you in on details from the first book.

The Bottom Line

Dragonforge keeps the “anything could happen next” feel of the first book, and adds some more interesting character arcs and a more fleshed out world on top of it. It’s a good sequel, so if you’ve read Bitterwood and enjoyed it, don’t hesitate to pick up Dragonforge.

What Do You Think?

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Books I Love: Bitterwood by James Maxey

Bitterwood by James Maxey
Book 1 of the Bitterwood Trilogy

What It’s About

In the distant future, a race of intelligent dragons dominates the Earth. They have subjugated humanity as slaves and pets, disdaining them as inferior beings. Bant Bitterwood is one of those subjugated humans, but when dragons kill his family and burn his hometown, he dedicates the rest of his life to killing as many dragons as he can. He kills so many that he becomes a folk hero to the humans and a terrifying legend among the dragons. When Bitterwood kills the dragon king’s favorite son, the king vows to kill every human alive in revenge.

Why I Like It

The thing I like most about Bitterwood is the constantly-shifting conflict. Maxey introduces a fairly large cast of characters with very different, but often overlapping, goals. Two characters that are working together at the beginning of a scene may find themselves in deadly opposition by the end after something unexpected happens. This multifaceted conflict really pays off in the climax of the book, which feels both totally crazy (in an “I can’t believe that just happened!” kind of way) and totally inevitable at the same time. The setup takes a while, but the headlong rush of the climax is definitely worth it.

Bitterwood is a good example of what I think of as a Science Fantasy. The story has a very fantasy-like feel to it, but underneath all the “magic” is a plausible science fiction explanation. The science fiction aspects are pretty light, more suggested than explicit, but it makes it feel more unique and less like “just another dragon story”. And let’s face it, if you’re writing a story about dragons at this point in the fantasy genre, you really need something different to make it stand out. Bitterwood does.

What I Don’t Like

At first I wasn’t all that interested in the dragon’s viewpoint chapters, since I was expecting the story to focus on the oppressed humans and their struggle for survival. But as the story went on its scope became larger than that, and I started getting more interested in the dragons’ viewpoints. I was also initially bothered by how human the dragons seem, but later in the story there are some hints about the dragons’ origins that explain why that might be.

The Bottom Line

Bitterwood is a great multi-layered adventure story. The characters are diverse and interesting, and their often-conflicting goals lead to a constantly changing conflict that is a lot of fun to watch unfold. The climax of this conflict is one of the best I’ve read, with the characters clashing in unexpected ways that somehow seem inevitable once they have happened.

What Do You Think?

Have you read Bitterwood? Leave a comment below and let us know what you thought of it!

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Writing Progess

Since I decided to start digging into writing a few months ago, I’ve done quite a bit of writing and work. Sadly, none of it is anything I can really show, as most of it has been analyzing and breaking down great stories, doing writing exercises, reading books on writing craft, etc. I feel like I understand what stories are and how they work much better now, but that’s not exactly riveting to read about, is it?

I will, of course, keep studying and practicing as time goes on, but it’s time to start working on my first book in earnest now. I’ll be using a lot of the brainstorming that I’ve already done, but I’ll need to basically start over on crafting everything now that I know more about how to make it work. So, the progress meter is going back to 0% again, but now it will actually be progressing. Woot.

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Testing RSS and Email Newsletter

Testing RSS again, but also testing how permalinks handle the same title being used again.

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